Adhd Poem

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Daisy
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Adhd Poem

Post by Daisy » Mon Apr 24, 2017 8:41 pm

Not that good with poetry but here goes.

whenever i swallowed that pill
i knew what was coming
nothing
no smile
no frown
nothing but a heavy coat
on me all day
covering everything
everything about me
i can't emphasize
NOTHING
enough
numbness
it is better to feel sadness, madness
than nothing at all


i cannot be this nothingness ghost

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Post by Phreak » Mon Apr 24, 2017 8:48 pm

Interesting poem

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Post by 12AM » Tue Apr 25, 2017 12:41 pm

It's a nice poem :)

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