Brain Dead Slut

May this be to allow your poetry to form motion however poetic or otherwise it may be :-)
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Brain Dead Slut

Post by Phreak » Mon Apr 17, 2017 5:48 pm

Stupid fucking brain dead slut,
Stupid fucking emotion glut,

Stupid fucking brain dead witch,
What a stupid fucking bitch,

The pain, the pain for ever more,
The knife that twists, the wound so sore

Plunged in deep into the heart,
The blade of treason most does smart

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Post by Kory Anders » Tue Apr 18, 2017 12:50 am

I like this one, Phreak.
Good job :)

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Post by Phreak » Tue Apr 18, 2017 7:36 pm

Thank you honey

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Post by pmmurphy » Thu Apr 20, 2017 11:25 am

the meter is pretty awesome here. This was cool!

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Post by Phreak » Fri Apr 21, 2017 9:57 pm

Thanks man

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